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white powder

I see dusty mirrors
reflecting your eyes
a glimpse of pureness
flashing my sky.
In a world of despair
your voice awakens me
and I meet an angel
wings bleeding blue feathers
Raped and bruised
I collect dirty smiles
this guilt on my shoulders,
forget and repent.
The angel is gone,
now i'm alone.
©2004-2010 =veronika
:iconveronika:

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... i cannot comment this, it kills me ...

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:iconetamnanki:
It's very beautiful... even if melancholic and depressive.
I like how everything is placed in an epic scaled to magnify the feeling in the poem.
Excellent work!:D

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One day... you will all get down on your knees before me and beg for the end.
Sadly, today is not that day...
:iconveronika:
:) thanks ^^
i didn't expect someone to like this :)

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:iconthe-perfect-drug:
very deep and well written, beautifully done :D
:iconjom:
Beautiful. I love it
:iconcalissa:
I'm not much into poetry but that was beautiful, Vampire. :heart: So sad and tragic, yet so beautiful. *sniff*
:iconstitchpuller:
i really like this ronnie........

here's another dirty smile for you to collect * *


sometimes the angels go away..... (tris to remember the line laura palmer said to donna in the movie Fire walk wiTH me.......


i love your poetry........
whisper more.....i'm dreaming............
:iconguardianmars:
*walks away with Veronika's stash of White Claudia, leaving a trail of hearts*

beautiful poem.

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Gone
:iconxmansonx:
very beautiful and powerful poem :) :claps:

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- tina -
:relaxed:
:iconstitchpuller:
nd sometimes, just sometimes......... when you bleed the most they will stay......



it kills me too..... :sadangel: :petting:

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